Well no, the science does need some work (and I imagine that would bother you much more than me), but the characters writing is quite solid, and you have to admit there are some clever jokes here and there, yes?
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Well no, the science does need some work (and I imagine that would bother you much more than me), but the characters writing is quite solid, and you have to admit there are some clever jokes here and there, yes?